Thursday, October 29, 2009

MY KNIGHT




After such a long time of feeling dead,

I could feel the blood running through my head.


It was hard for me to be like you,

Hopelessness crippled me and killed me too.


You came as a knight in the shining armor,
Holding sword in hand.


The best part is you never fought for me,
You simply gave the sword in my hand.


9 comments:

  1. one of the best lines i have ever read in my life... i simply loved the simplicity yet the deepness of these lines....
    i heartily give you a warm hug and 5 stars for it..
    eagerly waiting for more such words..
    love ya..
    muaaaahhhh

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  2. As the angle said one of the best lines i have ever r ead in my life... i simply loved the simplicity yet the deepness of these lines....


    These Words can make any mind to feel The Love........ of his life

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  3. awesome!!!
    Loved each word of it.. and it has the best ending...
    Wow!!

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  4. Best Teacher is the one who teaches you/motivates you to fight your own battle.
    As some truly say: wisdom can't be imparted, only knowledge can be.

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  5. just touched heart..
    ....add thees line please if you add more lines to this..
    you never knew how much I loved you...you will never know how much I got hurt by you....!!
    thanks..!!

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